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An account of my holiday

An account of my holiday. WALT : be competent in writing about your holiday . WILF : Grade D – Grade E + what you are going to do Grade C – Grade D + what you did Grade B – Grade C + complex sentences Grade A – Grade B + accurate spelling and grammar.

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An account of my holiday

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  1. An account of my holiday WALT: be competent in writing about your holiday • WILF: • Grade D – Grade E + what you are going to do • Grade C – Grade D + what you did • Grade B –Grade C + complex sentences • Grade A – Grade B + accurate spelling and grammar

  2. Here are the paragraphs that you are going to have to complete for your next Controlled Assessment: • 1. A description of a recent holiday you have been on – where you stayed, how you got there, when you went, etc... • 2. What you did whilst you were there • 3. Your opinion of the holiday • 4. What type of holiday you like best and why • 5. Your plans for your holiday next year • 6. Why you think you should win the competition.

  3. **Very important points** • You need to have: • Detail – describe everything • Variety – avoid using the same word all the time! It’s boring! • Linking Words – use these to form longer & more interesting sentences • Accuracy – check Spellings, Accents, Word Order, Agreement (masc. & fem.) • Refer to the Past, Present and Future!! • Lots of opinions and justify them Your whole piece of writing should be between 250 and 300 words – that is between 42 and 50 words per paragraph!

  4. This is how your work will be marked: Content Range of language

  5. Accuracy Total points available:

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