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好的句子 I. Standout Sentences. 1. 完整 完整是好句子的第一要点。一个完整的句子表达单一的完整的思想,它不包含并不紧密相关的意思,也不表达本身不完整的思想。. Faulty: Du Fu was one of the greatest poets. Revised: Du Fu was one of the greatest poets of the Tang Period. 第一句话有毛病,因为所表达的思想并不完整:时代和国家都没有提到。 加了 the Tang Period 句子的意思就清楚了:我们都知道唐是中国历史上的一个朝代。.

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好的句子 I

Standout Sentences


  • 1.完整完整是好句子的第一要点。一个完整的句子表达单一的完整的思想,它不包含并不紧密相关的意思,也不表达本身不完整的思想。




  • 2. Period.连贯连贯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。句子中的词语和部分应恰当地衔接,它们之间的关系应十分清楚。不连贯的句子通常有以下几种毛病:平行结构有缺点,代词指代不清楚,修饰语和被修饰语的关系不明确,在人称、数、语态、时态或语气上有混乱之处。





  • Revised: To get ready for the trip, she put all the things she needed into a suitcase.此句中有所谓的“悬垂”修饰语(To get…)。它与所要修饰的名词或代词没有结构上的联系。那个名词或代词有时甚至不在句中;即使在句中,也不应被现有的修饰语所修饰。因为用了“悬垂”修饰语,这种句子就缺少连贯性,也就让人难以理解了。




  • she needed into a suitcase..请改正以下病句:·Faulty: We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.





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