First, Second, and Third Order Elaboration – Enhancing Development in Your Writing. Presented by Mr. Celano, Will Robinson, and the Robot. The paragraph that follows needs help !. It obviously has some problems with lack of development or elaboration.
Presented by Mr. Celano, Will Robinson, and the Robot
Danger, Will Robinson! Danger!
That paragraph needs some work, Will Robinson. Let’s start by identifying the problems!