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如何使高考英语作文“亮”起来. 福清第三中学 何秀琼. How to enrich your writing. Teaching Procesure. Ⅰ. 单词 Ⅱ. 美化句子 Ⅲ. 精彩片断 Ⅳ. 连段成文 Ⅴ. 改头换面 Ⅵ. 写作要领 Ⅶ. 课后作业. Ⅰ. 天天单词. argument 财政的 burden afford 减轻 , 缓解 获得 , 得到 occupy advantage ordinary family social experience meet the expectation of the college

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How to enrich your writing


Teaching procesure

Teaching Procesure

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  • argument

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  • afford

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  • occupy

  • advantage

  • ordinary family

  • social experience

  • meet the expectation of the college

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  • 2. financial

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  • 5. relieve

  • 6. obtain

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  • Give the words according to the first letters or Chinese meaning given

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  • 2. Try to use recycled paper because it saves energy.

  • 3. The Forbidden City in Beijing is the biggest ancient palace in the world.

  • 4. You are not allowed to take food into the library.

  • 5. The museum is very familiar to Tom. He has been there many times.


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  • She has knowledge. She has experience.

  • She has not only knowledge but also experience.

  • She has experience as well as knowledge.

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  • You didnt go to see such a wonderful play. Its a pity.

  • Its a pity that you didnt go to see such a wonderful play.


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  • We should stick to our original plan. This is my idea.

  • My idea is that we should stick to our original plan.


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  • He will be back tomorrow.We hope so.

  • We hope that he will be back tomorrow.You have done an excellent days work.

  • I am much pleased to see it.I am much pleased to see what an excellent days work you have done


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  • He is a teacher. He often helps us.

  • He is a teacher who often helps us.

  • The day will come. People of the world will live a peaceful and happy life.

  • The day will come when people of the world live a peaceful and happy life.


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  • Were in school. We must keep fit,study well and work hard.

  • While were in school, we must keep fit, study well and work hard.()

  • John studied very hard. He answered all the questions correctly.

  • John answered all the questions correctly because he studied very hard. ()

  • You must work hard. Then you can fulfil your plan ahead of time.

  • You must work hard in order that you can fulfil you plan ahead of time.


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  • It was raining cats and dogs. We could not go out.

  • It was raining cats and dogs, so that we could not go out.

  • He has had great success. He remains modest and prudent.

  • Even if he has had great success, he remains modest and prudent. (

  • You work hard at English. You will make progress.

  • If you work hard at English, you will make progress.()


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1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.

2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. ()

3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.()

4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(

What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.

Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.

It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.

I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.


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5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. ()

6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( V-ing)

7.I wont believe what he says.

8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.

9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. ()

Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.

Singing and laughing, they went back to school.

No matter what he says, I wont believe.

Study hard and youll make rapid progress.

No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.


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  • 1We can imagine the beautiful surroundings2There are many trees along the streets3There is a clean river in the city4 There are many fishes in the river5There are willow trees on the one side6There are some pieces of grassland on the other side7There are many flowers on them


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  • 1Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener.2Green trees line the streets.3A clean riverwindsthrough the cityin which a lot of fishes abound4On the one side stand rows of willow trees5On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers


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  • Our hometown has changed a lot in the past few years.

  • Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past few years.

  • I searched all my pockets,but I found

  • nothing.

  • I searched all my pockets,but nothing. was found .


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  • Though he is a well-known scientist,he is easy-going.

  • Well-known scientist as he is ,he is easy-going.

  • A young girl stood by the raodside ,

  • selling flowers.

  • By the raodside stood a young girl , selling flowers.


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  • With the teachers help,I have made great progress in English.

  • It is with the teachers help that I have made great progress in English.

  • I didnt realize I had left the bag on the shop counter until I arrived home .

  • It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.


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  • I was attracted by the beauty of the West Lake.

  • What attracted most is the beauty of the West Lake.

  • He gave me not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it

  • What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it


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  • When she heard that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking.

  • Hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking.

  • If weather permits, well go hiking.

  • Weather permitting , well go hiking.


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  • There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our lifeFirstlypeoples living standard has been greatly improvedSecondlymost people are well paid and they can afford what they need or likeLast but not leastmore and more people prefer to enjoy modern life


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  • Books are like friendsThey can help us know the world betterand they can open our minds and widen our horizons Thereforereading extensively is of great benefit to us

  • Computers make our life much easier and entertains us in many different ways .

  • Firstly, computers make our life easier. People can store a lot of files in the computers, such as documents, photos, even books.


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  • This saves our space at home and makes people easy to manage their documents. Also people can buy or know anything they want without going out on the internet through computers. In addition, many computers software benefit us a lot. For example, the Microsoft Word Processer makes you write an article much easier than you write with your hand. Secondly, computers entertain our life in many different ways. There are many entertainments we can do on the computers. Such as playing computer games, chatting with friends, E-mailing others, and so on. These entertainments all enrich our life.


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  • Howevereverything divides into two The radiation of the computer screen hurt our eyes a lot. In addition, computers are bad for the growth of teenagers sometimes. Many teenagers lose themselves in the computer games or the internet. All these affect their daily study and waste their time. Some students play computer games overnight or for several days, this not only affect their study, but also their body health.


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  • We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollutionTo solve these problems we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollutionThe government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment


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  • Compared with carsbicycles have several advantages besides being affordableFirstlythey do not consume natural resources of petroleumSecondlythey do not cause the pollution problemLast but not leastthey contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise


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  • People have different attitudes towards failureSome believe that failure leads to success

  • Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavorHowever others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers


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  • From what has been mentioned abovewe can come to the conclusion that examination is necessaryhowever its method should be improved .

  • To sum up, computers make our life much easier and entertains us in many different ways, but long time use of the computers may affect our health and daily life. So its better to control the time of using computers and have a rest after use computer for several hours. .


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  • My family was very large.

  • My family met at my grandparents every holiday.

  • There were never enough chairs.

  • I always had to sit on the floor.

  • My family met at my grandparents every holiday. Because my family was very large, there were never enough chairs. As a result, I always had to sit on the floor.


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  • She wanted to be successful.

  • She worked day and night.

  • She worked for a famous advertising agency.

  • She became the manager.

  • She worked for a famous advertising agency. Because she wanted to be successful, she worked day and night.

  • Finally, She became the manager.


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  • He really wants to go swimming.

  • He has decided to go to the beach in California.

  • His sister lives there.

  • He hasnt seen her for six years.

  • He really wants to go swimming, so he has decided to go to the beach in California, where his sister lives. He hasnt seen her for six years.


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  • On one hand, doing part-time jobs can bring financial support to the students. The burden of the parents will be greatly relieved.


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At the same time, they will obtain some social

experience which is necessary for their future work.

On the other hand, it will occupy the students a

lot of time. As a result, it will be hard for them to meet the expectation of the college.


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  • Nowadaysthere are arguments on the part-time job in college. In my opinion, it has two sides.

  • On one hand, doing part-time jobs can bring financial support to the students. The burden of the parents will be greatly relieved. At the same time, they will obtain some social experience which is necessary for their future work.

  • On the other hand, it will occupy the students a lot of time. As a result, it will be hard for them to meet the expectation of the college.

  • Therefore, we should take the advantages of the part-time job and avoid its disadvantages. Only in this way can we really benefit from it.


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  • Trees are very important to us. They can not only take in carbon dioxide but also make our city beautiful.Planting trees can even change the climate.

  • To our disappointment,although we plant a great number of trees every year,few of them can survive because no one cares about them after planting.The government advocates every resident donating 25 to buy young trees and care for each tree.25 yuan is a small sum of money fou you,but it can help a tree a lot.

  • I think it is a good thing for everyone as well as our environmemt. Please jion us in the campaign as soon as possible.


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  • As we all know,trees are of vital important to us.Not only do they absorb carbon dioxide to produce oxygen,which isessential to the healthof human beings,but also they can makeourcity morebeautiful.Furthermore,the climate can even be changed by planting trees.

  • However, to our disappointment,in spite of the fact that a great number of trees are planted in spring and autumn every year, few survived for lack of care.Therefore,our government is appealing to every resident to donate 25 yuan to buy young trees and care for each tree.25yuan ,which is a small sum of money for you,makes a difference to a tree.


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  • As far as Im concerned ,this is a good chance to make contribution to our city .At the same time,we can enjoy a greener and clearer environment ,So why not join in our campaign?


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