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Carr-Gregg introduces the statistic that ‘6-10 per cent of users have a dependency that can be as destructive as alcoholism and drug addiction.’ By showing that the majority of young people are effected, Carr-Gregg encourages parents to feel alarmed that their child may be affected. He also uses the comparison to addictions that parents would be aware of and familiar with to help them understand the seriousness of the issue.