writing. planning. Discussion. Discuss in groups of four what Li Daiyu and Liu Qian saw and heard during their travel from Vancouver to Montreal and make some notes if necessary. . REVISION. Rocky mountains. Li Daiyu’s report. The Rocky Mountains,wild scenery,a grizzly
The Rocky Mountains,wild scenery,a grizzly
bear,mountain goats,wheat-growing center,
the busy port of Thunder Bay,ocean ships
on the top end of the Great Lakes
CN tower,mist of the Niagara Falls,the
covered stadium,Chinatown,Pink Pearl
Many signs and ads in French,the St.Lawrence
River,shops,artists in their workplace
Canada is bigger than the U.S.and the second
largest, 5,500 km from coast to coast.
Vancouver is the warmest and beautiful city
and the population here increase rapidly.
Ski in the Rocky Mountains and sail in the
Cantonese food,most of the Chinese from
South China,it takes long to Ottawa.
He is a student.Montreal has wonderful
restaurants and clubs.Most people speak
French.Good French coffee,bread and music.
Make sure your report has:
2.a short paragraph to introduce the topic of your report;
3.a different paragraph for each new piece of information
or new place;
4.a short conclusion.
Sample: Qian. What we saw in Canada
We traveled across Canada by train from west to east. We saw many interesting things both on thewayacross and in the cities of Toronto and Montreal.
We passed through the Rocky Mountains on the train and saw wild scenery,a grizzly bear and some mountain goats. In the center of Canada,it is a wheat-growing area and Thunder Bay is the busy port and ocean ships can come all the way to the top end of the Great Lakes.
In Toronto, we Qian.went up the CN Tower and saw the mist from Niagara Falls.We visited the covered stadium and Chinatown and had dinner at the Pink Pearl restaurant.
In Montreal, we saw many signs and ads in French.Then we went to Old Montreal and sat at a café beside the St Lawrence River.We spent the afternoon in the shops and visiting the artists in their workplaces.
There are so many things to see and do in Canada on our trip.We saw only a few things. We would like to have another visit to Canada!
1.make full use of what we have learned ;
2.use at least one Noun clauses as the appositive .
3.make your sentences smooth by using Linking words /phrases : show sequence (Firstly , First, First of all, to start with, Secondly, Next, then, Afterwards, After this/that, Finally, Last, Lastly, etc )
4.We write about our feelings, by using effective words, such as splendid, enjoy ourselves, instead of beautiful, happy etc.
Flow chart Qian.
What to see, what to feel
First， then， finally…
What to do
What should we learn about a city while traveling there?
The Yandang Moutain
The Nanxi River
A group of American friends come to visit Wenzhou, Suppose you were the guide, tell
them their one-day-trip arrangement.
Structure you were the guide, tell
1.The topic sentence
3.A short conclusion
Possible Version: you were the guide, tell
Today we will go on a tour of the city of Wenzhou.
In the morning we will pay a visit to the jiangxin Island where there are two famous towers and some old building.Besides , we can enjoy the beautiful scenery along the Oujiang River which flows into the East China Sea.
At noon,we can get good seafood here .Wenzhou is rich in all kinds of sea food,such as crabs,shrimps and fishes.
In the afternoon ,we will leave for Yandan Mountain which lies About 20 kilometers northeast of the downtown of Wenzhou,It is famous for the Hezhang Peak and The Dalongqiu Waterfall which is the highest waterfall in China.
In the evening ,you can spend your time in the lovely shops.
I’m sure you will have a lot of fun here
composition after class.