BAIL EVALUATION. GEORGE TUNNICLIFFE . Brief Plot Summary.
The film is based on a play written by Roy Williams and I believe is in a category of its own through its use of flashbacks and slang terms, it does not conform to stereotypes of a typical British drama as to begin with no gore/ swear words are used, it is all left to the viewers imagination.
My film follows three young offenders who are all about 18 years of age. The boys appear chatting in a prison cell together and the majority of the film consists of each one telling the story of how they became arrested through a series of flashbacks.
I feel the character Nabs is most similar to in terms of other teen dramas is the character of ‘Cook’ from skins. With this in mind I decided to allow Nabs to take on some of his common traits such as a distinctive walk and his over-violent nature.
A character I also took inspiration from was that of Danny Zuko from Grease as he is a teenager who puts on an act to create a sense of authority when really he is very sensitive underneath the act, this side of Nabs is shown as the film progresses.
Ichose to use voiceovers or commentaries over our video to give a feeling of the characters reflecting over their previous mistakes, I also believe it helped to show the emotion of the characters as they reflect on their mistakes in life.
I took inspiration from the film ‘The Shawshank Redemption’ as I believed the voiceovers used were extremely effective in showing characters true thoughts and emotions.
The lighting I used within my film was predominantly natural as the flashbacks used were all outside and I feel it helped to create a sense of realism. I also chose to choose natural lighting as in some ways it can reflect a mood already created by a specific character. For example in Nabs’ flashback the sky appears dull and it is a cold winters day, this cold reflect his harsh, unforgiving mood. I feel the use of light within my film is essential in conveying the hidden emotions of the characters, for example the dark grey of the sky around them could show to an audience that they are feeling depressed or unhappy. With this in mind I made sure that no scenes were filmed upon very sunny days with bright natural light as I feel this would create the wrong setting.
However for one scene in particular I chose to add a filter as I intended to show Nabs’ character in a dream like state as Neela dumps him.
It was important to me to have a strong establishing shot that indicates to an audience what the film will be based around. I also believed it to be important to leave a lasting image to provoke thought within an audience.
I chose to shoot the Police Station through the surrounding fence as I believe it connotes rebellion as well as showing the building from the characters perspective.
I also chose to include a non-diegetic soundtrack consisting of
For my opening credits I decided upon a still image of each character introducing them one by one. I decided to do this as I had seen the technique done in the film ‘Trainspotting’ and found it to be very effective.
Placing each actors name in a different place upon the screen was also a deliberate decision as I felt it did not match the typical forms and conventions, which tend to create a sense of continuity which overall makes the credits seem dull and insignificant.
I kept the soundtrack running through these stills so that the film didn’t appear to be disjointed at any time.
A number of jump cuts and shot-reverse shots were used throughout my film, these were used to not only give the idea of a naturalistic conversation between characters and keep the story fluid, but also to create a sense of suspense as the action quickly unfolds.
There few a few instances in which we decided to use the camera without a tripod so as to blend the camera holder in with the characters so you could watch it from their point of view, I believe this was very effective at some points yet at others it could look very unprofessional.
is worn in an attempt for the
characters to conceal their
identities, again suggesting
they may be troublemakers.
Included names of cast members and overall reviews from well regarded newspapers.
Mugshots link with the prison theme & feeling trapped
At first I decided to follow the forms and conventions of an already successful film poster as I believed little text allowed a reader to concentrate solely upon the image. However after making my poster I soon decided that it appeared too bare and contained too little information to interest an audience so I made some alterations.
I believe my poster conforms to the forms and conventions of many other posters as the main character is shown to be in the center of the frame.
However the central character is also the only character featured upon my poster indicating he is perhaps the leader or of more importance than other characters.
I researched posters from films such as The Dark Knight & Ghostbusters as they have become iconic films and can easily be identified by the majority of people, meaning they are able to leave their posters looking very simplistic yet effective.
I constructed my dps to appeal to a younger audience of around 16-21 year olds as this is the main target audience for my film.
Text is neatly structured and not too bulky
I took inspiration from various magazines but paid particular to ‘behind the scenes’ articles that showed actors both in and out of character.
I decided to slightly alter my original draft as I felt the text was too bulky and could potentially put off a reader so I decided to cut it into small, neater sections.
In conclusion I am very pleased with how my final pieces have been created, however after seeing them together I almost feel like they are about two completely different films as the poster is very dramatic and simple yet the double page spread is seen to be a lot more lighthearted and less serious.