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A DRAB plan LO: To be able to plan the final structure of our stories.

A DRAB plan LO: To be able to plan the final structure of our stories. Put the story plan in order!. D R A B. The old man is brought back to the present with the voices of his family.

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A DRAB plan LO: To be able to plan the final structure of our stories.

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  1. ADRAB plan LO: To be able to plan the final structure of our stories. Put the story plan in order! D R A B The old man is brought back to the present with the voices of his family. As they get close to the beach, shots are fired by the enemy. Men are killed. The man jumps into the water. It’s chaos. An old man walks to a war cemetery, followed by his family. He cries and falls on a grave. His family gather round him. The old man flashes back to his past, as a soldier. He is in a war ship going towards Omaha beach. He is shaking and terrified. 1 3 2 4

  2. Date: Friday 16th September Title: Finishing our DRAB plan LO: To be able to plan the final structure of our stories. Put the story plan in order! D R A B The old man is brought back to the present with the voices of his family. As they get close to the beach, shots are fired by the enemy. Men are killed. The man jumps into the water. It’s chaos. An old man walks to a war cemetery, followed by his family. He cries and falls on a grave. His family gather round him. The old man flashes back to his past, as a soldier. He is in a war ship going towards Omaha beach. He is shaking and terrified.

  3. Let’s see how it looks in the movies!

  4. Dramatic Opening • This is the first scene of your story: does it GRAB attention? • Who is in the scene? • Where are they? • What do we see around the character? • What is the weather like? • How is the character feeling?

  5. Rewind • This is flashback? • Where does your character flash back to? • Why? • What do we see around the character? • What is the weather like? • How is the character feeling?

  6. Action • This is like ‘flashback continued’ • What is happening? • How is it different from the beginning? • What do we see around the character? • What is the weather like? • How is the character feeling?

  7. Back to the Present • We go back to before the flashback • What is happening now? • Is it a happy or sad place to be? Why? • What do we see around the character? • What is the weather like? • How is the character feeling?

  8. Look at your 4 cards. Does your story make sense yet? Do you need to add a scene?

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