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2. You have adopted 1 feedback comment in draft 2 Quick Feedback Mrs T’s Lang Arts Class College : My Harvard Dream Draft 1 Draft 2 > Clarity Is it clear what the main point of this paragraph is? Average rating by 1 Drafter Buddy Influence? Why is it that the people who influence us most influence us in ways that are not easily quantified? Through her work with abused children, my mother has shown me the heroism of selfless dedication to a worthy cause. By being an upstanding individual, my playwriting teacher in middle school acted as an inspiring male role model at a time when I needed one most. By being approachable and interesting, my World History teacher in my freshman year of high school opened my eyes to the connections between a society's culture and its history and broadened my view of cultures and the world. While these influences mean much to me and have contributed greatly to my development, they came too easily to mind. Mrs T says… Feedback from Drafter Buddies • Remember to : • Present a unique point of view • Have a main point for your paragraph • Support your main point with evidence /anecdotes a Alex: Maybe you should spell out the words ? Since this is a college entrance essay..) Fox: what do you mean by this? Fox: I think this is a stupid essay. Writers can ‘block’ drafter buddies Save Ready to Publish?

3. You currently have 1 work published Your Publications College : My Harvard Dream With special thanks to Mrs T & Alex Burke for their wisdom and support The Importance of Family Trees Dedication to writing instructor and drafter buddies whose feedback was adopted Book cover Edit? Dedication Edit? Kate Willis Publish Now?

4. Congratulations! You have published 2 writing pieces! Your Publications The Importance of Family Trees College: My Harvard Dream Kate Willis Kate Willis

5. The ‘play’ button enables readers/instructors to see all the changes they have made ‘played’ out Congratulations Kate! You have published ‘College: My Harvard Dream’ Influence? Why is it that the people who influence us most influence us in ways that are not easily quantified? Through her work with abused children, my mother has shown me the heroism of selfless dedication to a worthy cause. By being an upstanding individual, my playwriting teacher in middle school acted as an inspiring male role model at a time when I needed one most. By being approachable and interesting, my World History teacher in my freshman year of high school opened my eyes to the connections between a society's culture and its history and broadened my view of cultures and the world. 1 College: My Harvard Dream With special thanks to Mrs T & Alex Burke for their wisdom and support

6. Welcome back Kate! Drafter Updates Buddy Updates Mrs T’s Lang Arts Class Mrs T’s Lang Arts Class Personal Essay : Finding myself again 3 Comments Alex Burke Draft 1 ‘My Stanford Dream’ 3 Comments Given, 1 Comment Adopted College: My Harvard Dream 15 Comments Marie G. Draft 3 ‘An unfulfilled promise’’ 1 Comment Given Marie G. Draft 2 ‘A Broken Promise’ 3 Comments Given, 2 Comments Adopted Each icon represents a draft of the writing task My Publications Drafter Stats Buddy Stats 312 points Super Drafter! 4 Drafts 120 points 23 Comments Given 46 points 12 Comments Received 24 points 9 Comments Adopted 45 points 1 Publication 50 points Instructor Bonus 27 points

7. Give feedback to your Drafter Buddies! Mrs T’s Lang Arts Class Your Buddy Stats 312 points Super Drafter! 23 Comments Given 46 points 9 Comments Adopted 45 points Alex Burke – Draft 1 ‘My Stanford Dream’3 Comments Given, 1 Comment Adopted Marie G. – Draft 3 ‘An unfulfilled promise’’1 Comment Given Marie G. – Draft 2 ‘A Broken Promise’ 3 Comments Given, 2 Comment s Adopted Hyperlinks to Drafter Buddies’ Drafts and My Comments Updates Give feedback to Fox – Draft 1 ‘Why I Hate School’ Give feedback to Alex Burke– Draft 2 ‘My Stanford Dream’ Marie G. has just published ‘An unfulfilled promise’ Your Drafter Buddies’ Stats Alex Burke 332 points Kylie Wu 345 points Fox 246 points Marie G. 372 points

8. assign now save for later SET NUMBER OF DRAFTS What’s Drafter? The Community Published works Contact Us Prompt Number 3: Travel Narrative ASSIGN instructor student indywriter YES 5 BUDDIES BY STAR SCORE NO 4 BUDDIES 3 DRAFTS 3 BUDDIES 2 DRAFTS 1 DRAFT Instructor’s View set metrics SET GROUPS STAR QUICK FEEDBACK: The darker shade indicates the selection ALPHABETICAL Clarity: Is it clear what the main point is? HAND SELECT Think of a real experience you have had that would be hard to forget. Think about what makes it so hard to forget. Tell what happened. RANDOM RANDOM REMINDER TO STUDENTS: Remember to present a unique point of view. SET GROUP SIZE HIDE NAMES

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