Better Thesis Statements. A+ thesis. A simple thesis fits into one sentence. More complicated ideas may be broken into two sentences to preserve clarity and avoid awkward syntax. Argument Thesis Statement Pattern. There are 5 essential parts: Topic/subject Claim(s)/position
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Corporate advertisements in public schools are appropriate and even desirable in order to provide much needed funding and to create a realistic educational environment, as long as corporations don’t control the curriculum. This will allow schools to purchase the latest equipment and students to be better prepared for life as wary adult consumers.