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Voice Review. Voice – A writer’s or speaker’s personal and individual use of language created on purpose by the way the author writes. Diction – The specific word choice an author makes to have a specific effect (single words and phrases).

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Voice review

Voice Review

  • Voice – A writer’s or speaker’s personal and individual use of language created on purpose by the way the author writes.

  • Diction – The specific word choice an author makes to have a specific effect (single words and phrases).

  • Syntax – The arrangement of words and the order of grammatical elements in a sentence.

  • Imagery – The words or phrases used to describe persons, objects and actions by focusing on the senses (including figurative language).


Words to describe voice

Words to Describe Voice:

Angry

Lonely

Passionate

Sarcastic

Emotional

Sophisticated

Juvenile

Honorable

Concerned

Humorous

Authoritative

Mature

Immature

Patriotic

Scholarly

Crazy

Intellectual

Conceited

Opinionated

Confused

Critical

Argumentative


Individuality and identity in poetry

Individuality and Identity in Poetry


Marking the poems

Marking the Poems:

  • Perfect

    • Circle the positive words

    • Put a box around negative words

    • Draw a line at the tone shift (change in emotion)

    • At bottom of poem, describe the following:

      • Speaker’s Voice: Audience:

  • Paper Doll People

    • Circle any words you don’t know

    • Put a box around negative words

    • Underline images that describe paper doll people

    • At bottom of poem, describe the following:

      • Speaker’s Voice: Audience:


Perfect

Perfect

I looked in the mirror today

Perfectly groomed

Perfectly dressed

Perfect little smile

I looked at my resume today

Perfect straight A’s

Class President

Head Cheerleader

Perfect little student

I looked at my family today

Perfect parents

Perfect siblings

Big white house

And money to spare

I looked at my disposition today

Voice:

Perfectly perky

With sugar-coated sweetness

That must make others sick

I looked at myself today

Never satisfied with all I have

Always wanting more

Insecure, searching

Hopeless, broken-hearted

Pretentious, superficial

Obsessed with how

I appear to others

Not as perfect

As one would think

My perfection is only as stable

As the blurry image in the mirror

Of a not-so-perfect girl

Who can’t even decipher

The source of her own

imperfect tears


Paper doll people

Paper Doll People

Your plastic eyes search my figure

So different from yours

Unique and hideous

A creature you have never seen 

You shake me violently, and turn me over

Looking for my seam

The place of imperfection

Where you can rip me apart and find out what I am made of

I am different from you

And it scares you

I have disrupted your neat order

Your common sense geometric world 

Voice:

You hate me

And all because I choose to be my own person

But I am not you and I am not like you

Though I want to be like you

I try to stand in your rows of paper doll people

And I pretend that you won’t notice

But I am always found out

I want to be accepted

But I refuse to be like you

The happy medium I’m searching for

is nowhere to be found

So I sit by myself, cowering

Hiding in the corner of our world

Watching as the single file lines

Of paper doll people go by.


Perfect and paper doll people analysis questions

“Perfect and “Paper Doll People” Analysis Questions

  • Answer each question in complete sentences.

  • Each answer should be a paragraph in length.

  • Be sure to answer all parts of the question.


Perfect and paper doll people review

“Perfect” and “Paper Doll People” Review:

  • In “Perfect”, what words would you use to describe the author?

  • What’s ironic about the title “Perfect” ?

  • What was the author of “Paper Doll People” saying about her peers?


Paper doll directions

Paper Doll Directions:

  • How others view us and what is expected of us is not always how we really feel on the inside.

  • You will be finding a visual way to show your true identity/how you view yourself and how others may see you. 


Side one outside

Side One (Outside)-

  • Fill side one with ideas about how you think others see you or what others expect of you.

  • Use:

    • Words

    • Symbols

    • Sentences

    • Pictures

    • Colors


Side two inside

Side Two (Inside)-

  • Fill side two with ideas about how you actually feel and who you really are.

  • Use:

    • Words

    • Symbols

    • Sentences

    • Pictures

    • Colors


Voice review

Side One (Outside)-

Side Two (Inside)-

Fill side two with ideas about how you actually feel and who you really are.

Fill side one with ideas about how you think others see you or what others expect of you.

Use:

Words

Symbols

Sentences

Pictures Colors

Use:

Words

Symbols

Sentences

Pictures Colors


Side one outside1

Side One (Outside)-

  • Fill side one with ideas about how you think others see you or what others expect of you.

  • Use:

    • Words

    • Symbols

    • Sentences

    • Pictures

    • Colors


Side two inside1

Side Two (Inside)-

  • Fill side two with ideas about how you actually feel and who you really are.

  • Use:

    • Words

    • Symbols

    • Sentences

    • Pictures

    • Colors


Voice review

Side One (Outside)-

Side Two (Inside)-

Fill side two with ideas about how you actually feel and who you really are.

Fill side one with ideas about how you think others see you or what others expect of you.

Use:

Words

Symbols

Sentences

Pictures Colors

Use:

Words

Symbols

Sentences

Pictures Colors


My example

My Example


Student example

Student Example


Student example1

Student Example


Student example2

Student Example


Student example3

Student Example


Student example4

Student Example


Voice review

Snobby Humble

Conceited Modest

Synonyms:Antonyms:

1. Pretentious-

2. Decipher-

3. Disrupted-

4. Unique

5. Disposition-

Translate Scramble

Analyze Confuse

Disturbed Arrange

Agitated Organize

Rare Common

Uncommon Usual

Personality Appearance

Mood Physical


Voice review

Side One (Outside)-

Side Two (Inside)-

Fill side two with ideas about how you actually feel and who you really are.

Fill side one with ideas about how you think others see you or what others expect of you.

Use:

Words

Symbols

Sentences

Pictures Colors

Use:

Words

Symbols

Sentences

Pictures Colors


Paper doll people self analysis

Paper Doll People Self Analysis

  • First step: List the words you will use to describe yourself on the inside and the outside.

  • Second step: Create a complete rough draft that maps out what your paper doll will look like.

  • Third step: Create your final draft on your paper doll graphic organizer.


Paper doll people self analysis1

Paper Doll People Self Analysis

  • Fourth step: Color in your paper doll person. Your color choices should reflect the words inside your doll.

  • Fifth step- Cut your dolls out. I am not responsible for decapitated dolls.

  • Sixth Step- Write your name on the back and turn your dolls into the basket. Staple your rough draft to your dolls.


Paper doll people self analysis2

Paper Doll People Self Analysis

  • Do NOT rush through this project.

  • Do not ask your friends what they think of you. This is a SELF analysis.

  • Do not ask me what I think of you. Again, this is a SELF analysis.


Paper doll self analysis

Paper Doll Self Analysis

  • You MUST color in your paper dolls.

  • You MUST have a detailed rough draft.

  • Total points possible: 50


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