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Unit 1 Women of Achievement 人教版 Book 4 Writing Class 华南师范大学外文学院 2011级英师四班 蔡苏铭

Unit 1 Women of Achievement 人教版 Book 4 Writing Class 华南师范大学外文学院 2011级英师四班 蔡苏铭. Review. Lin Qiaozhi was a doctor who devoted her life to her patients. She made sure that about 500000 babies were safely delivered.

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Unit 1 Women of Achievement 人教版 Book 4 Writing Class 华南师范大学外文学院 2011级英师四班 蔡苏铭

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  1. Unit 1 Women of Achievement 人教版 Book 4 Writing Class 华南师范大学外文学院 2011级英师四班 蔡苏铭

  2. Review Lin Qiaozhi was a doctor who devoted her life to her patients. She made sure that about 500000 babies were safely delivered. Jane Goodall is a scientist who has studied chimps in East Africa for more than 40 years. She enjoys working with animals

  3. There are many excellent women in our life… doctor lawyer hostess actress teacher

  4. Do you know any successful woman in life? Choose one you admire and describe her! To describe a person, you can begin like this:

  5. Step1: ask Wh-questions Brainstorming Step2: make a list of her achievement or activities Step3: find out proper adjectives to describe her characteristics Organization of the composition

  6. 1. Ask wh-questions What does she look like? Why do you admire her? What did she do to impress you most? What are her strengths/ weaknesses?

  7. Take Yang Lan for an example Appearance: beautiful, elegant, Feelings and comments: active, confident, determined The reason of admiring her: she is one of the most successful hostesses in China

  8. 2.Make a list of her achievement Example host the Zheng Da variety show, China's top-rated TV program in 1990s a master's degree from Columbia University in the United States chairwoman of Sun TV …… Yang Lan

  9. 3.Describe her characteristics or personality • Active • Brave • Confident • Determined • Generous • Hard-working • Intelligent • Warm-hearted • Patient • Independent • Smart • Bright • Wise • …… • Active • Confident • Determined • Intelligent • Independent • ……

  10. 4.Organization of a composition • Brief introduction —Name of the person —The relationship between you and her • Main body —Personality/characteristics —Her activities or achievements • Conclusion —Your comments/feelings about the person

  11. The reason of admiring her • Yang Lan, who is elegant and professional, is my favorite Chinese hostess. • Yang Lan, born in 1968 in Beijing, who holds a master's degree from Columbia University in the United States, is probably China's wealthiest self-made woman. Her achievement

  12. Yang Lan became the hostess of Zheng Da variety show when she was just 21 and within a year, Zheng Da became China's top-rated TV program. After many year's hard work, she has been one of the most successful hostesses in China and now she is the chairwoman of Sun TV. She is always active and confident, and never stopps learning and exploring. Her work attitude has inspired me for a long time. Her life experience Comments/feelings

  13. Excercise • Write a composition describing a woman who has influenced your life the most. • You can choose whoever you like. • Pay attention to the structure and words.

  14. Thank you!

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