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What do you see?

She took everything in then, and I with her: the house with the sloping roof, the evergreens leaning over it, the dark shadow that was the woodpile on the front porch. -Patricia Reilly Giff, Pictures of Hollis Woods.

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What do you see?

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  1. She took everything in then, and I with her: the house with the sloping roof, the evergreens leaning over it, the dark shadow that was the woodpile on the front porch. -Patricia Reilly Giff, Pictures of Hollis Woods The morning the Reeds’ baby died was June 5: a day shimmering with light, the smell of lilacs hanging sweetly in the willow tree behind the house where Alyssa was hiding. -Susan Shreve, Blister What do you see?

  2. Colon : Purposes: • Announces a surprise or a list • Acts like a drum roll for something to follow Tips: Capitalize the first word after a colon only if it’s a proper noun or the start of a complete sentence.

  3. How easy it was to disappear: A thousand trains a day entered or left Chicago. -Erik Larson, “The Devil in the White City” Every ten minutes by the small clock built into the dashboard he tried to radio with a simple message: “I need help. Is there anybody listening to me?” -Gary Paulsen, “Hatchet”

  4. Finish these sentences using a colon. Sentence Starters • So many things ruined my thirteenth birthday: 2. Today is a new day:

  5. So many things ruined my thirteenth birthday: I asked for a present that I didn’t get, I couldn’t finish my math homework, and my best friend did not attend my birthday party. 2. Today is a new day: Nothing is going to ruin my day. Possible Answers.

  6. Instructions: Place colons where needed. • She had three personality flaws pride, selfishness, and a temper. • The singers in the concert will be you, Pam, and Becky. Be ready to go, this show could get us a record deal. • A tent, three sleeping bags, and a gas lantern how could you go camping without them and survive?

  7. Answers: • She had three personality flaws:pride, selfishness, and a temper. • The singers in the concert will be you, Pam, and Becky:Be ready to go, this show could get us a record deal. • A tent, three sleeping bags, and a gas lantern:How could you go camping without them and survive?

  8. Look at your essay and elaboration notes • Where can you incorporate a colon into your writing? • Underline the colon sentence on your t-chart or rough draft. • Share your sentence with your partner. Are there any changes that you need to make? 4. Write your sentence on a sentence strip or post it to add to the “colon” chart on the back wall.

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