They Say, I Say :. The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing. By Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein. Introduction. Academic writing requires to express themselves and respond to others
The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing
By Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein
“You come late. When you arrive, others have long preceded you, and they are engaged in a heated discussion, as discussion too heated for them to pause and tell you exactly what it is about… You listen for a while, until you decide you have caught the tenor of the argument; then you put in your oar. Someone answers; you answer him; another comes to your defense; another aligns himself against you… The hour grows late, you must depart. And you do depart, with the discussion still vigorously in progress”
-Kenneth Burke, The Philosophy of Literary Form
The following claims all provide an “I Say.” See if you can supply a plausible “They Say.” What might these be responding to?
In his article “Don’t Blame the Eater,” David Zinczenko argues that today’s fast food chains fill the nutritional void in children’s lives left by their overtaxed working parents. With many parents working long hours and unable to supervise what their children eat, Zinczenko claims, children today regularly turn to low-cost, calorie-laden foods that the fast food chains are all too eager to supply. When he himself was a young boy, for instance, and his single mother was away at work, he ate at Taco Bell, McDonald’s, and other chains on a regular basis and ended up overweight. Zinczenko’s hope is that with the new spate of lawsuits against the food industry, other children with working parents will have healthier choices available to them, and they will not, like him, become obese.
In my view, however, it is the parents, and not the food chains who are responsible for their children’s obesity. While it is true that many of today’s parents work long hours, there are still several things that parents can do to guarantee that their children eat healthy foods.
Summarize the author’s views accurately, in a way that fits your own agenda. DO NOT, however, ignore or misrepresent the source.
Quoting what THEY SAY must always be connected to what YOU SAY!!
Choose Meaningful Passages
Susan Bordo writes about women and dieting. “Fiji is just one example. Until television was introduced in 1995, the islands had no reported cases of eating disorders. In 1998, three years after programs from the united States and Britain began broadcasting there, 62% of the girls surveyed reported dieting.”
I think Bordo is right. Another point Bordo makes, is…
The feminist philosopher Susan Bordo deplores the hold that the Western obsession with dieting has on women. Her basic argument is that increasing numbers of women across the globe are being led to see themselves as fat and in need of a diet. Citing the island of Fiji as a case in point, Bordo notes that “Until television was introduced in 1995, the islands had no reported cases of eating disorders. In 1998, three years after programs from the united States and Britain began broadcasting there, 62% of the girls surveyed reported dieting.” Bordo’s point is that the West’s obsession with dieting is spreading even to remote places across the globe. Ultimately, Bordo complains, the culture of dieting will find you, regardless of where you live.
Bordo’s observations ring true to me because a friend of mine from a remote are in China speaks of the cult of dieting among young women there…
Find a text that quotes someone’s exact words as evidence of something “they say.” How has the writer integrated the quotation into his or her own text? How has he or she introduced it and what, if anything, has the writer said to explain it and tie it to his or her own text? Based on what you’ve read in this chapter, are there any changes you would suggest?
Look at an essay or report that you have written for one of your classes (Summer Synthesis Essay and/or Adversity Argument Essay!) Highlight your quotes/summaries in one color, your explanation/ connection in a second, and introductory information in a third.
How have you integrated the quotation into your own text? How have you introduced it? Explained what it means? Indicated how it relates to your text?
Write a paragraph of analysis about your quote integration.
Disagree- and explain why
X argues for stricter gun control legislation, saying that the crime rate is on the rise and that we need to restrict the circulation of guns. I agree that the crime rate is on the rise, but that’s precisely why I oppose stricter gun control legislation. We need to own guns to protect ourselves against criminals.
Agree- but with a difference
Agree and Disagree Simultaneously
Read the following passage by Jean Anyon, an education professor at Rutgers University, Newark. As you’ll see, she summarizes the arguments of several other authors before moving on to tell us what she thinks. Does she agree with those she summarizes, disagree, or some combination of both? How do you know?
Read one of the essays at the back of this book (packet), underlining places where the author agrees with others, disagrees, or both.
We are all middle class. As a result, our class differences are muted and our collective character is homogenized.
Class divisions are real and arguably the most significant factor in determining both our very being in the world and the nature of the society we live in.
- Gregory Mantsios, “Rewards and Opportunities: The Politics and Economics of Class in the US”
I like a couple of cigarettes or a cigar with a drink, and like many other people, I only smoke in bars or nightclubs. Now I can’t go to any of my old haunts. Bartenders who were friends have turned into cops, forcing me outside to shiver in the cold and curse under my breath… It’s no fun. Smokers are being demonized and victimized all out of proportion.
“Get over it,” say the anti-smokers. “You’re the minority.” I thought a great city was a place where all kinds of minorities could thrive… “Smoking kills,” they say. As an occasional smoker with otherwise healthy habits, I’ll take my chances. Health consciousness is important, but so are pleasure and freedom of choice.
“Admit it. You like yourself better when you’ve lost weight.”
Can I deny these things? No woman who has managed to lose weight would wish to argue with this. Most people feel better about themselves when they become slender. And yet, upon reflection, it seems to me that there is something precarious about this well-being. After all, 98 percent of people who lose weight gain it back. Indeed, 90 percent of those who have dieted “successfully” gain back more than they ever lost. Then, of course, we can no longer bear to look at ourselves in the mirror.
Repeat Yourself – but with a difference