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Some more writing mistakes …be careful !! Jan.18, 2012. I will tell what I did last Christmas I’m going to tell you what I did last Christmas I’m going to write about what I did … There are people who they don’t celebrate it There are people who don’t celebrate it
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I will tell what I did last Christmas • I’m going to tell you what I did last Christmas • I’m going to write about what I did … • There are people who they don’t celebrate it • There are people who don’t celebrate it • At New Years Eve we were at my brother with my family • On New Year’s Eve we were at my brother’s (house) with my family
I had not to work, so I was sleeping all the day • I did not have to work, so I was sleeping all day • One day after, we went to the commercial center • One day later, we went to the shopping centre • It say that the Christmas are for children, this dates are special • It is said (People say) that Christmas is for children, these dates are special
I went to my house for having dinner, and Papa Noel visit us • I went home to have dinner, and Santa Claus visited us • We went at a party where we enjoyed, and at New Year I rested • We went to a party where we enjoyed ourselves, and on New Year’s day I rested • In this holidays I was a lot of time with my family • On / During these holidays I was with my family for a long time
There was a Magic Kings procession, and the kings left any present for me • There was the Three Kings’ parade, and the kings left some presents for me • The children passed the holidays playing every day with their toys • The children spent the holidays playing with their toys every day • We had dinner seafood and a lot of nougats • We had seafood and a lot of nougat for dinner • For dinner, we had seafood and a lot of nougat
On January 6 came the Three Kings, is the best day to the children • On January 6 the Three Kings (the Three Wise Men) came, it’s the best day for children • The 5 of January it is the night of the Kings • The 5 of january is the night of the Three Kings • January 5 is Three Kings’ night