Writing Workshop 1. Grade Breakdown. 6 100-A 5 90-A 4 80-B 3 70- C 2 60- D 1 55- F 0 Did not turn in . Topic Sentence.
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Writing Workshop 1
Highlight the support for your Star Ideas in pink or underline in red
1) Do you have enough support?
2) Is what you wrote even supporting a star idea or is it just rambling?
Papers with t-charts were astoundingly better organized.
Let’s look at one example of a 6 level paper by Simiah Johnson.
Get rid of all of the following:
In my opinion
I believe that
As you can see
in formal writing.
According to the article “Elon Studies the Future of ‘Generation Always-On’” by Dan Anderson, youth of today have a “thirst for instant gratification.”
According to a study by Elon University, young people are living a “hyper-connected lifestyle.”
Danah Boyd, senior researcher with Microsoft, stated, “There is no doubt that brains are being rewired.”
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