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Senior grade 2. (2nd term) 八校联考 : Part 1.

Senior grade 2. (2nd term) 八校联考 : Part 1. 联考作文存在的问题 : Writing 1: 简单的翻译 , 中文式句子语言不地道 . 单词拼写 : fashion/fashionable, humour/convenient,convenience, Conveniently/thought/ misunderstand sb/sth; misunderderstanding/ lack sth be lack of …. 3. 文章干瘪 , 不连贯 , 没有逻辑性

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Senior grade 2. (2nd term) 八校联考 : Part 1.

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  1. Senior grade 2. (2nd term) 八校联考: Part 1.

  2. 联考作文存在的问题: • Writing 1: • 简单的翻译, 中文式句子语言不地道. • 单词拼写: fashion/fashionable, humour/convenient,convenience, • Conveniently/thought/ • misunderstand sb/sth; misunderderstanding/ lack sth be lack of …

  3. 3.文章干瘪,不连贯,没有逻辑性 4.句子过于简单,不会使用复杂句(从句). 5.书写潦草,卷面不整洁. 6.缺少自己的观点/感受.

  4. ……There are different opinions onInternet Slang. Some students think Internet slang is vivid and using it is a kind of fashion whichis full of humour and intelligence and it makes chatting on the Internet quicker. However, on the other hand, some other students hold different viewsthat Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and it is too simple. Above all, it is still not so popular as to be understood and accepted by most

  5. people. If the words are used too often, people will just be confused. As a result, it may lead to misunderstanding. In my opinion, every coin has two sides, so living in the Information Age, we seem to fall behind the times provided that we don’t know the Internet Slang. It will be ok as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.

  6. Writing 2: 1.体裁多样性:议论文,说明文,记叙文. 2. 第一段: 概括 30词左右, 不允许抄袭原文,否则, 打低分. 3.句子结构 ; *People have different kinds of opinions on should people own a private car. …on whether people should own the…

  7. 2.In nowaday, have a car is become more and more popular. 3.I am not agree with every family has a car. 4. Owing a car is very popular. Nowadays /At present, having a car is becoming …… I don’t agree that every family has …. Owning a car is……

  8. 5, We can by bus to instead of drive a car. We can go to work by bus instead of driving a car. • Provide sb with sth • do harm to …. • pollution • own/owe/government/ environment

  9. Should private car be encouraged ? According to the report, we know that more private cars are owned by people. Private cars have their own advantages and disadvantages. So people have different opinions on whether we should own a car or not. As a famous saying goes, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, it is commonly accepted that private cars are convenient to our life, which can

  10. help people save time. Compared to buses and trains, private cars are more comfortable and flexible. On the other hand, the private cars can also cause a lot of trouble. More cars on the road will lead to traffic jams easily. What’s worse, they are producing waste air that does harm to our health, making the environment problem serious. In addition, private cars need a large

  11. amount of petrol , which causes danger for the natural sources of oil. As far as I ‘m concerned, private cars should be controlled in a proper range. It’s high time that government took some measures to solve this problem. For example, more people should be encouraged to use public transportation. At the same time people should raise their awareness of protecting the environment and use

  12. private cars when it is necessary.

  13. Part 2.E.W (new version) 27: • Writing 1. • 没有认真审题; • 没有表达出所提供全部信息; • 中式表达;句子结构错误多; • 语言单一;缺连接词 • 词数偏少; • 缺少自己的观点.

  14. 1.According to the form/chart/diagram/survey about the students of America how to use time. *According to the recent survey, we can know how the students of America use their free time. *A recent survey showed that ….. *The survey found that….. *carry out a survey 最近的民意调查/调查报告显示…… 调查报告发现.. 进行一项民意调查

  15. 2.*Watching TV in 42% of students. *Watch TV spent 42% of their time *American students watched TV takes up 42% of their time. (in) doing… on sth 1) sb spend time/money =time/money is/was spent …… *They spend 42% of their free time in watching TV/ on TV.

  16. *42% of their free time is spent on TV. 2) It takes sb some time to do sth *It takes them 42%... to watch TV 3) Sb takes up time with (doing) sth *They take up 9% of their free time with reading books. 4) Sth costs sb money. *The book cost me 20 yuan.

  17. 5). Sb pays money for sth *I paid 20 yuan for the book. 6) Sb uses sth to do sth 3.百分比的表达: • 90% of the students in his class • _____ league members. • *80% of the work ______________ • (finish) are has been finished

  18. Listen ______ the radio. • ______ the Internet • ______ a chat ______ telephone • _____ one’s spare time to surf have by in Writing 2. • summary 抄袭原文; • 没有具体的事例来论证;

  19. 3. 句子结构错误 4. 叙述条理不清晰 *列出提纲 *写出常用的句型结构 *As a famous saying goes, every coin has two sides. *It is known to all that…. *As we all know, …. *As is known to all, …..

  20. As far as I am concerned,….. • It seems to me that….. • Someone holds the point that….. • 5. Grammar mistakes: • I am not agree to him. * Sb agree with sb/one’s opinion *sb agree to idea/decision/plan… * Sb agree on terms/date * Sb agree to do sth

  21. *have bad influence to children * affect/effect/influence have bad influence on sb ^ He affected me a lot. ^He has great effect on me. ^He has good influence on me. ^He influenced me a lot

  22. Part 3; EW 21. Writing 1: 一.句子的连贯性, 句子结构错误 二. Grammar mistakes: 1. national/international 2. an international language 3.Study English can make you to learn a lot. * Studying English can make you learn ……

  23. 4.There are a lot of books are worth to read which wrote by English. *A lot of books, which is worth reading are written in English * There are a lot of valuable books, which are written in English. 5. easy, easier, easily *It is easy for sb to do sth * You can do sth easily

  24. 6. You can be able to …. • You can do sth • You are able to do sth 7.If you know English that you can travel all over the world. *If you know English, you can ….. *As we all know, ….. As is known to all, …..

  25. 8. Nowadays 9. make a living 10. pass, past 11.We study English is very necessary. *It is very necessary to study English. 12. value/valuable 13. a piece of advice/information 14. have a chance to do sth

  26. 15. I must to study hardly to make my English get more progress. *I must study hard so as to make much more progress in my English study. 16. lonely/ alone * sb feel lonely / a lonely man * He is alone, but he doesn’t feel lonely. *He is too young to go out alone.

  27. Writing 2:Are Neighbours important ? • summary: • no example( your own experience) • example is too long • no conclusion • some grammar mistakes:

  28. 1)As far as I am concerned, as we all know…. 2) He is at home/He is in. *He is not at home/He is out. 3) take sth for example 4) We can’t emphasize the importance of doing sth too much. *We can’t emphasize the importance of having good neighbors too much.

  29. 5.That is the reason why we should being a good neighbour. *That is the reason why we should have ….. 6. Due to people live in an age of machines that is being more independent. *Due to the age of machines, people become more and more independent.

  30. 7.Due to our good neighbours, we can live healthier and happier. * Due to our good neighbours, we can live healthily and happily. *……..we can live in perfect harmony.

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