Loose now pay later carol farley
This presentation is the property of its rightful owner.
Sponsored Links
1 / 23

Loose Now, Pay Later Carol Farley PowerPoint PPT Presentation


  • 128 Views
  • Uploaded on
  • Presentation posted in: General

Trinja. TREVOR. CANDY STORE. Loose Now, Pay Later Carol Farley. SLIMMER. DEBBIE. 3 rd Hour Marina Trolinger Mercedes Loftus. Swoodies. ALIENS. Summary.

Download Presentation

Loose Now, Pay Later Carol Farley

An Image/Link below is provided (as is) to download presentation

Download Policy: Content on the Website is provided to you AS IS for your information and personal use and may not be sold / licensed / shared on other websites without getting consent from its author.While downloading, if for some reason you are not able to download a presentation, the publisher may have deleted the file from their server.


- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - E N D - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Presentation Transcript


Loose now pay later carol farley

Trinja

TREVOR

CANDY STORE

Loose Now, Pay LaterCarol Farley

SLIMMER

DEBBIE

3rd Hour

Marina Trolinger

Mercedes Loftus

Swoodies

ALIENS


Summary

Summary

  • This short story is about two friends, Deb and Trinja, who come to the mall every day after school. One day they notice a new shop at the far end of the mall where hardly anybody ever goes. The stores’ name is Swoodies, and the friends decided to go inside. No one is in the store to run it and the sign says that everything is free. There is one problem, everyone is gaining weight like crazy because no one can stop shoving the Swoodies candy in their mouth. The friends noticed a sign near the booth that said THE SLIMMER. They walked over there and a woman told them to just step inside and lose any unwanted fat. Deb stepped in the machine for about 30 seconds and stepped out. Deb was 5 pounds lighter. So Trinja collected all of the money she had and went in the slimmer. Trinja lost 12 pounds because of it. The woman had to give Trinja a prick on the wrist for every 10 pounds they lose, but they were too happy to care.

  • Deb’s younger brother was very suspicious of this and was saying that aliens are trying to turn our fat into power for their world, and that they built Swoodies to speed up that process and the slimmer to transfer the fat and harvest it into energy. But the girls thought he was just a stupid 10 year old kid. He also said that the pricks on your wrist were seen by the aliens. If you had too many pin pricks, your fat content won’t be any good anymore. But the friends thought that the pricks looked cool, like delicate tattooed bracelets, and that they both looked really neat on their wrists.


Focus question

Focus Question

  • What if you could eat all of the candy you wanted and never gained any weight?


Exposition it deals with the beginning setting characters and initiating action

ExpositionIt deals with the beginning setting, characters, and initiating action.


Exposition

Exposition

  • The exposition deals with the two best friends, Trinja and Deb.


Exposition1

Exposition

  • They go to the mall every day after school. The friends see a store in the corner of the mall called “Swoodies”.


Exposition2

Exposition

  • The girls decide to go in it. When they enter, they are swarmed with amazing smells of different candies and flavors. They notice a sign that says “FREE”, and there is also no one working or running the store.


Loose now pay later carol farley

Rising ActionThe rising action leads to the climax. It builds suspense and leads up to the turning point of the story.


Rising action

RISING ACTION

  • The Rising Action in “Lose Now, Pay Later.” begins when they enter the store and try all of the candy in Swoodies’


Rising action1

Rising Action

  • After about a week goes by Swoodies Candy Store is the most popular store in the mall.


Rising action2

Rising Action

  • Soon the fat filled candies cause people to gain weight quickly. That is when the Slimmer's come into town. A Slimmer is a machine that sucks body weight straights off of you in less than 20 seconds.


Rising action3

Rising Action

  • The only catch other than loosing one pound for 25 yen is that every ten pounds a blue dot is inserted into your wrist by a tiny shot.


Loose now pay later carol farley

ClimaxThe climax is the turning point in the story that nobody expects. It is a discovery or a change in the situation.


Climax

Climax

  • The climax is when Trevor tells everyone about what he thinks the aliens plan is. He thinks the aliens are using the fat as energy. He thinks maybe the Swoodies are here so people will get fat quicker so that there’ll be more to harvest through the slimmer machines.


Climax1

Climax

  • Trevor says the spaceships are invisible to humans. He also thinks the blue marks on everyone’s wrists mean a count because when there’s too many, people will be culled from the flock because their fat isn’t good enough.


Loose now pay later carol farley

Falling ActionThe falling action is occurs after the climax or resolution. It ties up the loose ends and the story comes to an end.


Falling action

Falling Action

  • The falling action is when Debby says she could quit eating Swoodies whenever she pleases. Humans would never sacrifice their freedom and dignity just to eat and still be thin.


Falling action1

Falling Action

  • Also, she and Trinja enjoy their blue dots on their wrists. They think it looks like a pretty blue bracelet.


Science fiction elements

Science Fiction Elements

  • Our short story had multiple science fiction elements. It included aliens, unpractical machines, and candy appearing from no where.


Story responses

Story Responses

  • Lose Now Pay Later

  • By Carol Farley


Story responses1

Story Responses

  • Mercedes says, “This short story is very entertaining and compelling.”

  • Marina says, “I think this story was very exciting to listen too. You never know what will happen next!”

  • Mikel says, “ I think this short story was very interesting and different. I liked the writers way of literature.”


Bibliography

Bibliography

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoS9thhlPDmoAQUeJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dblue%2Btattoo%2Bon%2Bwrist%26ei%3Dutf-8%26vm%3Dr%26fr%3Dsfp%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D10&w=450&h=232&imgurl=www.wristbandtattoos.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2011%2F11%2Fceltic-wrist-tattoo.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.wristbandtattoos.com%2F&size=26.7+KB&name=Blue+wire+Celtic+tattoo+on+wrist.&p=blue+tattoo+on+wrist&oid=7f8b4acdef796c8eb9de614b6c3c8b58&fr2=&fr=sfp&rw=blue+tattoo+on+wrist&tt=Blue%2Bwire%2BCeltic%2Btattoo%2Bon%2Bwrist.&b=0&ni=21&no=10&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=110nl8mr7&sigb=13amgombl&sigi=12bnkojff&.crumb=5a6RXWb5OWM

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoS0 VPhhPaAQAtw2JzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3D10%2Byear%2Bold%2Bworried%2Bboy%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26vm%3Dr%26fr%3Dyfp-t-701%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D114&w=500&h=374&imgurl=www.hometowndailynews.com%2Fuploads%2Fenlarged_fc13a8ae15e86b3.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.hometowndailynews.com%2Flocal_news.php%3Fid%3D2724&size=19.4+KB&name=Courageous+10-year-old+Faces+Health+Challenge+%E2%80%93+HometownDailyNews+...&p=10+year+old+worried+boy&oid=eecb2c7f82babe1775fc5e3759cfc370&fr2=&fr=yfp-t-701&tt=Courageous%2B10-year-old%2BFaces%2BHealth%2BChallenge%2B%25E2%2580%2593%2BHometownDailyNews%2B...&b=91&ni=84&no=114&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=11n7ru13o&sigb=13plqh6nn&sigi=11uvj6snc&.crumb=W4Hj6lMqeGb

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoTFcOhhPlFMAJ_eJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Daliens%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26vm%3Dr%26fr%3Dyfp-t-701%26tab%3 Dorganic%26ri%3D4&w=678&h=509&imgurl=ivarfjeld.files.wordpress.com%2F2011%2F01%2Faliens1.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fivarfjeld.wordpress.com%2F2011%2F01%2F12%2Fscientists-urge-un-to-prepare-for-alien-invasion%2F&size=29.5+KB&name=aliens&p=aliens&oid=bc4e26239edbbe910bd3bf916caf83f6&fr2=&fr=yfp-t-701&tt=aliens&b=0&ni=84&no=4&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=12rpdekpn&sigb=136dqtfab&sigi=11h65f2cn&.crumb=W4Hj6lMqeGb

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoTC1NhhPIT0AOb6JzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbW c-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Daliens%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26fr%3Dyfp-t-701%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D5&w=409&h=465&imgurl=zodiblog.files.wordpress.com%2F2009%2F11%2Faliens1.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fzodiblog.wordpress.com%2F2009%2F11%2F12%2Fpope-vs-alien%2F&size=86.7+KB&name=...+that+the+aliens+will+be+able+to+further+%E2%80%98pimp%E2%80%99+his+pope-mobile&p=aliens&oid=3b4aea11012ee61b8e40ed2c695be60d&fr2=&fr=yfp-t-701&tt=...%2Bthat%2Bthe%2Baliens%2Bwill%2Bbe%2Bable%2Bto%2Bfurther%2B%25E2%2580%2598pimp%25E2%2580%2599%2Bhis%2Bpope-mobile&b=0&ni=84&no=5&tab=organic&ts=&sigr=11nov100n&sigb=1319c8k93&sigi=11g13sbms&.crumb=W4Hj6lMqeGb

    http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoTGyOBhP1QYAdDeJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dfree%2Bsign%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26vm%3Dr%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D0&w=650&h=720&imgurl=www.kooziez.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2011%2F06%2FFree-Sign.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.kooziez.com%2Fdesign%2Fclipart-available%2Fcollege-school%2Ffree-sign%2F&size=51.6+KB&name=Free-Sign&p=free+sign&oid=d9334effd6cab8590fcdb0506a5e0065&fr2=&fr=&tt=Free-Sign&b=0&ni=30&no=0&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=129cko3mm&sigb=12sof0cg3&sigi=11osvm8ml&.crumb=2vFxJt7hh0t

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoS2M6xZPzwoAWkKJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dchocolate%2Bcandy%2Bassortment%26sado%3D1%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26fr2%3Dsg-gac%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D13&w=450&h=321&imgurl=image.shutterstock.com%2Fdisplay_pic_with_logo%2F113263%2F113263%2C1226453585%2C1%2Fstock-photo-assorted-chocolate-candies-on-crystal-serving-plate-with-boxed-candy-in-background-macro-with-20388946.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.shutterstock.com%2Fpic-20388946%2Fstock-photo-assorted-chocolate-candies-on-crystal-serving-plate-with-boxed-candy-in-background-macro-with.html&size=74.2+KB&name=Assorted+chocolate+candies+on+crystal+serving+plate+with+boxed+candy+...&p=chocolate+candy+assortment&oid=15db5509527444a4c072462b7bea725c&fr2=sg-gac&fr=&tt=Assorted%2Bchocolate%2Bcandies%2Bon%2Bcrystal%2Bserving%2Bplate%2Bwith%2Bboxed%2Bcandy%2B...&b=0&ni=84&no=13&tab=organic&ts=&sigr=14nr559s9&sigb=13rrc8555&sigi=15u7q6iqm&.crumb=o2USCUCPvjm


Bibliography1

Bibliography

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoTFKNxhPFykA9oWJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dchocolate%2Bfactory%2Bin%2Ba%2Bmall%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26vm%3Dr%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D0&w=400&h=300&imgurl=img.groundspeak.com%2Fwaymarking%2Fdisplay%2F002cbb65-9a11-453a-84bd-5588e064e6a8.JPG&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.waymarking.com%2Fwaymarks%2FWM7QKD_Rocky_Mountain_Chocolate_Factory_Oakridge_Mall_San_Jose_CA&size=36.4+KB&name=Rocky+Mountain+Chocolate+Factory+-+Oakridge+Mall+-+San+Jose%2C+CA+...&p=chocolate+factory+in+a+mall&oid=b33fd406c6a6ff64c404ac4afa3f0ca9&fr2=&fr=&tt=Rocky%2BMountain%2BChocolate%2BFactory%2B-%2BOakridge%2BMall%2B-%2BSan%2BJose%252C%2BCA%2B...&b=0&ni=72&no=0&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=134psem6s&sigb=13ecsn8jp&sigi=12fqfvmam&.crumb=2vFxJt7hh0t

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoS8fOBhPoQcACe6JzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3D10%2Byear%2Bold%2Bboy%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D5&w=650&h=453&imgurl=www.visualphotos.com%2Fphoto%2F2x4510773%2F10_year_old_boy_with_walking_stick_on_trail_in_wv06825.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.visualphotos.com%2Fimage%2F2x4510773%2F10_year_old_boy_with_walking_stick_on_trail_in&size=44.6+KB&name=10+year+old+boy+with+walking+stick+on+trail+in+woods%2C+Lake+Katherine+...&p=10+year+old+boy&oid=40444a30e5aabead176b45c2091a7b70&fr2=&fr=&tt=10%2Byear%2Bold%2Bboy%2Bwith%2Bwalking%2Bstick%2Bon%2Btrail%2Bin%2Bwoods%252C%2BLake%2BKatherine%2B...&b=0&ni=72&no=5&tab=organic&ts=&sigr=12qe0e800&sigb=12tjldl7b&sigi=12v44lskn&.crumb=2vFxJt7hh0t

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoTHw6hZPsRAABguJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dtwo%2Bteen%2Bgirls%26ei%3DUTF-8%26vm%3Dr%26fr%3Dyfp-t-701%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D27&w=801&h=1200&imgurl=us.123rf.com%2F400wm%2F400%2F400%2Fdnfstyle%2Fdnfstyle0810%2Fdnfstyle081000012%2F3688239-two-young-girls-shopping-in-the-sunny-weather.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.123rf.com%2Fphoto_3688239_two-young-girls-shopping-in-the-sunny-weather.html&size=166.7+KB&name=Two+Young+Girls+Shopping+In+The+Sunny+Weather+Royalty+Free+Stock+Photo+...&p=two+teen+girls&oid=13428fc7725a14f72c30461a407422f3&fr2=&fr=yfp-t-701&tt=Two%2BYoung%2BGirls%2BShopping%2BIn%2BThe%2BSunny%2BWeather%2BRoyalty%2BFree%2BStock%2BPhoto%2B...&b=0&ni=21&no=27&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=12l96s5pk&sigb=13auh1i70&sigi=13srmcbuh&.crumb=o2USCUCPvjm

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoS1VNRhPexEA.yKJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Dshopping%2Bat%2Ba%2Bmall%26ei%3Dutf-8%26vm%3Dr%26fr%3Dsfp%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D51&w=1920&h=1200&imgurl=sky-wallpaper.com%2Fuploads%2F2010-11%2Fhappy-shopping-holiday-wallpaper%2F1289378608-AWPKQSJ.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fsky-wallpaper.com%2Ffree-wallpaper%2Fhappy-shopping-holiday-wallpaper_47922.html&size=295.2+KB&name=Shopping+Girls+Wallpaper+-+Happy+Shopping+Holiday+Wallpaper&p=shopping+at+a+mall&oid=307d0a660f4ee33a0e4ab8394be80b4b&fr2=&fr=sfp&tt=Shopping%2BGirls%2BWallpaper%2B-%2BHappy%2BShopping%2BHoliday%2BWallpaper&b=31&ni=72&no=51&tab=organic&ts=&vm=r&sigr=12jps6hdr&sigb=138vf1fo1&sigi=12poc8un7&.crumb=2vFxJt7hh0t

  • http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A0PDoTGLNxhPr1EAOAWJzbkF;_ylu=X3oDMTA3cnMybzJvBHNsawNpbWc-?back=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.search.yahoo.com%2Fsearch%2Fimages%3Fp%3Doutside%2Bof%2Ba%2Bmall%26n%3D30%26ei%3Dutf-8%26tab%3Dorganic%26ri%3D6&w=415&h=332&imgurl=www.fat32online.com%2Fwp-content%2Fuploads%2F2011%2F12%2FDubai_Mall_03.jpg&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.fat32online.com%2Fcrazy-exotic-cars-outside-a-mall-in-dubai-dayumm-video%2F&size=48.8+KB&name=Crazy+Exotic+Cars+Outside+a+Mall+in+Dubai+%E2%80%93+DAYUMM%21+%5Bvideo%5D+%7C+FAT32&p=outside+of+a+mall&oid=a36ffd2f5ce384a258c969e217dfe443&fr2=&fr=&tt=Crazy%2BExotic%2BCars%2BOutside%2Ba%2BMall%2Bin%2BDubai%2B%25E2%2580%2593%2BDAYUMM%2521%2B%255Bvideo%255D%2B%257C%2BFAT32&b=0&ni=72&no=6&tab=organic&ts=&sigr=12i23vli9&sigb=12vc90bt5&sigi=120ie00ub&.crumb=2vFxJt7hh0t


  • Login