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书面表达 ——

书面表达 ——. 英语学习中一道亮丽的风景. 仔细审题. 巧妙谋篇. 精心表达. 书面表达写作三步走. 一 . 仔细审题. Analyzing the topic carefully. 假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的 “ 有困难向谁求助 ” （ Whom do you turn to when in trouble? ） 的调查活动，调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报 编辑写一封信反映相关内容。. the key points in analysing the topic. 注意： 1 ．内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了

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书面表达 ——

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  1. 书面表达—— 英语学习中一道亮丽的风景

  2. 仔细审题 巧妙谋篇 精心表达 书面表达写作三步走

  3. 一.仔细审题 Analyzing the topic carefully

  4. 假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助” （Whom do you turn to when in trouble?） 的调查活动，调查结果如下表。请用英语给校报 编辑写一封信反映相关内容。 the key points in analysing the topic 注意：1．内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了 使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。 2．词数：150词左右。

  5. 假如你是刘芳，你的美国笔友Bob在网上见到下面的漫画，向你询问其含义。假如你是刘芳，你的美国笔友Bob在网上见到下面的漫画，向你询问其含义。 请用英语写一封150词左右的e-mail，内容如下： 1．简要描述漫画； 2．解读该生放弃高考的可能原因； 3．谈谈你个人的观点。 解图

  6. The young man has reluctantly(不情愿地) given up the coming college entrance examination and he feels very sad. difficult 1) He has to find a job and support himself. 2) It seems no use going on to college.

  7. 二.巧妙谋篇 Organizing the writing artfully

  8. 下面柱状图 (bar chart) 显示了不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况。 Time spent in talking with parents 根据上图信息，请以“Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents”为题，用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。要求如下： 1．简要描述图中信息； 2．说明原因，如：忙于学习或工作、由于代沟 (generation gap) 而缺少共同话题……； 3．谈谈你的看法。

  9. 图中信息 It is well done in designing and organizing! 原因 你的看法

  10. 友情提醒 在谋篇布局时就要考虑到落笔时须分段落写作,才能脉络清楚,条理分明。

  11. 三.精心表达 Expressing your thoughts in words

  12. 1 2 4 3 How to express your thoughts in words points 捕捉要点 sentences 扩展成句 article 连句成文 纠错誊写

  13. 2009年6月，江苏省教育厅做出决定：严禁中小学利用暑假和双休日补课。引起了社会各界强烈的反响。请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语给某报社写一封信。 points? 注意： 1、信必须对所给要点逐一陈述，可作适当发挥；至少表达2点个人感想；信的内容不能涉及考生姓名和所在班级。 2、词数150左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

  14. List the important points! ensure sleeping time devote oneself to study self-development community work awareness of public service lack self-control arrange time properly less class time, low grades examination system fierce competition your opinion 1.保证睡眠时间 2.投入学习 3.自我发展 4.社区服务 5.公共服务意识 6.缺乏自控力 7.合理安排时间 8.时间少，成绩差 9.考试体制 10.激烈竞争 11.你的感想

  15. 扩展成句 1.ensure sleeping time Many people support this decision for they think it will ensure the sleeping time of students in middle and primary schools. 2.devote oneself to study They will be energetic enough to devote themselves to their study. 3.self-development It will be beneficial to their self-development. 4.community work 5.awareness of public service They can participate in community work and strengthen their awareness of public service.

  16. 扩展成句 6.lack self-control 7.arrange time properly The students lack self-control to arrange their free time properly. 8.less class time, low grades They believe less class time may result in low grades. 9.examination system 10.fierce competition Since the present examination system hasn’t been changed, it’s difficult for them to cope with such fierce competition. 11.your opinion Personally, the decision is quite good.

  17. Wonderful sentences are sure to add colour to your writing! How ???

  18. Which is better? 1.我们可能会受同学的影响，不能集中精力学习了。 A .We may be affected by our classmates and can’t study hard. B. we may be disturbed by our classmates, in which case we can’t focus on our study. 2.直到多年之后我才发现他的友谊对我来说意味着什么。 A. Not until many years later did I find what his friendship meant to me. B. I found the meaning of his friendship many years later .

  19. 3.过不了多久我就会再见到我的好朋友的。 A. It will not be long before I meet my good friend again. B. I will see my good friend again soon. 4.虽然我们已经很努力了，但是经理对我们一点也不满意。 A．Though we worked hard, the manager wasn’t pleased with me. B．Hardworking as we are, the manager is by no means satisfied with us.

  20. 5.全世界都知道树木对我们是非常重要的。 A. It is universally acknowledged that trees are of great importance to us. B. We all know trees are very important to us. Using advanced words, phrases and sentence patterns

  21. To better your sentences, try to use—— 非谓语动词，with复合结构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语从句，名词性从句，状语从句等。

  22. 友情提醒 平时关注课文中的复杂句型，勤记并活用所学各种句型。

  23. Test yourself—— 一句多译

  24. 显然，知识在我们的一生中起着非常重要的作用。显然，知识在我们的一生中起着非常重要的作用。

  25. It is obvious that knowledge plays an important role in our life. Obviously, knowledge is of great importance in our life. It is clear that knowledge plays an important part in our life. What is obvious is that knowledge is very important in our life.

  26. 她的脸上总是挂着微笑，这使我印象深刻。

  27. What impresses me most is that there is always a smile on her face. She is always wearing a smile on her face, which impresses me deeply. The smile on her face leaves a deep impression on me. My deep impression is that she is always smiling.

  28. 我收到邀请已有三天了，但不知道该不该去赴宴。我收到邀请已有三天了，但不知道该不该去赴宴。

  29. I received the invitation three days ago, but I wonder whether I should go to dinner. It is three days since I received the invitation, but I don’t know whether to accept it or not. I have had the invitation for three days. However, I don’t know whether I should go to dinner.

  30. 因为老师的及时救助，地震中许多孩子的生命得到挽救。因为老师的及时救助，地震中许多孩子的生命得到挽救。

  31. Many children were saved in the earthquake because there was the timely help of the teachers. But for/without the timely help of the teachers, many children would not have been saved in the earthquake. Helped by the teachers in time, many children were saved in the earthquake.

  32. 友情提醒 常用句型需要积累，在笔记本里开辟专门区域记录好句子，做个有心人！

  33. 连句成文 巧用关联词语(Linking words) 1）表示平行或选择关系 as well as, together with, not only…but also..., rather than 2）表示转折关系 however, in spite of, otherwise, while 3）表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand... 4）表示因果关系 therefore, as a result (of), owing to, due to, thanks to.

  34. 5）表示时间、顺序关系 firstly, …secondly, …,for one thing ... for another, eventually 6）表示递进、强调关系 what’s more, in addition, worse still, moreover, furthermore, above all 7）表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on 8）表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion

  35. 2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生： ◆ 每天锻炼一小时 ◆ 健康工作五十年 ◆ 幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意： 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。 词数：120左右。发言稿开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program; 教育部——the Ministry of Education Practice

  36. The Ministry of Education(教育部) calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, _____________they will have good health to work fifty years and _____________ enjoy the whole life. on the contrary furthermore in short therefore otherwise however

  37. 友情提醒 写作时有意识提醒自己插入恰当关联词语。

  38. 纠错誊写 注意时态语态人称是否正确,词数是否符合要求,是否有破句等。修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定区域，卷面要整洁清爽。 Handwriting !!!

  39. 书写切忌乱涂乱改， 卷面邋遢，字迹不清等

  40. Wonderful !

  41. 仔细审题 巧妙谋篇 精心表达 Summary

  42. 通知、通告 （NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT) • 口头通知： • Ladies and Gentlemen, • May I have you attention please? • 正 文 • 书面通知： • NOTICE • In celebration of May Day , there will be --- • 正 文 • School Office • April 25th , 2000

  43. 申请信、求职信 • 必备词汇:apply position qualified （合格的）interview qualification（资格） contact（联系） advertise consider student’s union reply vacancy (空缺) • 提分句型 1）I think I ‘m the right person for the job you advertised 2) I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of sales manager 3）Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply. 4) If you need to know any more about me ,please contact me at 9234888 5) I am writing in response to your advertisement for a secretary.

  44. 参考模板一 • Feb 1,2011 • Dear … • I ‘m writing to apply for … here is my personal information for you . • ………. • If my application could be taken into consideration, I would be most grateful. And your early reply will be highly appreciated. • Yours sincerely • LiHua

  45. 参考模板二 • Feb 1,2011 • Dear … • I ‘m writing this letter to express my great interest in ….., and I ‘d like to apply as…. • …… • I would be very grateful if you grant me an interview. • Yours sincerely • LiHua

  46. 参考模板三 • Sept 1, 2011 • Dear …. • I write this letter to apply for this position that you have advertised in ….. • I am sure that I meet the qualifications you specified in your ads. I am a …, and I have …. I have also… • Thank you for your favorable consideration of my application. I am looking forward to your prompt reply. • Yours sincerely • LiHua

  47. Practise: • 假设你是新华中学学生李华，得知某英文报招 • 聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报 • 社写一封自荐信。 • 表示感兴趣 • 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 • 希望得到回复 • 注意：1. 词数：100左右； • 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

  48. Dear sir or Madam: I’m a student from XinHua Middle School. I’m glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. I’m quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for the job. As a student, I’ve read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I’m sure I can do the job well if I get the position. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua

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