English 20-1. Essay Revision and Editing. Titles and Authors. Authors need to be introduced in either the introduction (usually the blueprint) or topic sentences of body paragraphs. Titles need to be separated from the rest of the writing:
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Essay Revision and Editing
Ex. The apple is tasty. I want to eat it.
Ex. The apple is tasty; I want to eat it.
The apple is tasty, so I want to eat it.
Evelyn wants Ed to notice her so badly that she even goes to an organization
which,“[believes] that women [can] find complete happiness if they, in turn,
[will] dedicate their entire lives to just making their man happy” (43).
She feels so helpless that when, “she [wants] to scream out for help…she
[just lays] there in that dark pit of her own personal hell” (Flagg, 133).
Once again, Idgie finds herself alone, and this time she, “just can’t take it,” so
she decides to leave (93).