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2. “Hey Carlos, James said, whats the assignment for English class tomorrow.” • Carlos replyed, we’re supposed to read an Iroquois myth write a poem and studying for a spelling test. • Many native american cultures have there own versions of Coyote Storys. Day 1

3. “Hey Carlos, James said, whats the assignment for English class tomorrow.” • “Hey Carlos,” James said, “what’s the assignment for English class tomorrow?” • Carlos replyed, we’re supposed to read an Iroquois myth write a poem and studying for a spelling test. • Carlos replied, “We’re supposed to read an Iroquois myth, write a poem, and study for a spelling test.” • Many native american cultures have there own versions of Coyote Storys. • Many Native American cultures have their own versions of Coyote stories. Day 1 Corrections

4. When a author writes a short story, they may have to do some research. • Having died in the Spring, Momaday returned to Rainy mountain in july to mourn his grandmother. • Did you go to the bank she asked? Day 2

5. When a author writes a short story, they may have to do some research. • When an author writes a short story, he or she may have to do some research. • Having died in the Spring, Momaday returned to Rainy mountain in july to mourn his grandmother. • Momaday returned to Rainy Mountain in July to mourn his grandmother, who had died in the spring. • Momaday returned to Rainy Mountain in July to mourn his grandmother, who had died in the spring. • Did you go to the bank she asked? • “Did you go to the bank?” she asked. Day 2 Corrections

6. Of Plymouth plantation a book by William Bradford describes the experiences of the pilgrim settlers in north America. • Ava did you know that Olaudah Equiano grew up in west Africa, in a village called essaka”? Roger asked. • “He would’ve growed up to rule that village” said Ava “but he was kidnapped and made a slave.” Day 3

7. Of Plymouth plantation a book by William Bradford describes the experiences of the pilgrim settlers in north America. • Of Plymouth Plantation, a book by William Bradford, describes the experiences of the Pilgrim settlers in North America. • Ava did you know that Olaudah Equiano grew up in west Africa, in a village called essaka”? Roger asked. • “Ava, did you know that Olaudah Eqiano grew up in West Africa, in a village called Essaka?” Roger asked. • “He would’ve growed up to rule that village” said Ava “but he was kidnapped and made a slave.” • “He would’ve grown up to rule that village,” said Ava, “but he was kidnapped and made a slave.” Day 3 Corrections

8. The word blue in the title of blue highways does not refer to the color of the asfault in Utah. • William Least Heat-Moon suggest to Fritz that he is more tolerant than many other. • Angelou has been a dancer, writer an actress and singer she read her poem on the Pulse of Morning at president Clinton’s inauguration. Day 4

9. The word blue in the title of blue highways does not refer to the color of the asfault in Utah. • The word blue in the title of Blue Highways does not refer to the color of the asphalt in Utah. • William Least Heat-Moon suggest to Fritz that he is more tolerant than many other. • William Least Heat-Moon suggest to Fritz that he is more tolerant than many others. • Angelou has been a dancer, writer an actress and singer she read her poem on the Pulse of Morning at president Clinton’s inauguration. • Angelou has been a dancer, a writer, an actress, and a singer. She read her poem “On the Pulse of Morning”at President Clinton’s inauguration. Day 4 Corrections

10. Sinners In The Hands Of An Angry God is Jonathan Edwards famousest sermon. • Edwards write sermons and philosophical works and religious works. • Having been hanged, the town eventually expressed regret for Sarah’s death. Day 5

11. Sinners In The Hands Of An Angry God is Jonathan Edwards famousest sermon. • “Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God” is Jonathan Edwards most famous sermon. • Edwards write sermons and philosophical works and religious works. • Edwards wrote sermons and philosophical and religious works. • Having been hanged, the town eventually expressed regret for Sarah’s death. • After Sarah was hanged, the town eventually expressed regret for her death. Day 5 Corrections

12. Of all Arthur Miller plays I like The Crucible better. • In puritan times they thought hanging witches was right today few people woud agree. • What were the sequence of events leading to the declaration of independence. Day 6

13. Of all Arthur Miller plays I like The Crucible better. • Of all Arthur Miller’s plays, I like The Crucible best. • In puritan times they thought hanging witches was right today few people woud agree. • The Puritans thought hanging witches was right. Today few people would agree. • What were the sequence of events leading to the declaration of independence. • What was the sequence of events leading to the Declaration of Independence? Day 6 Corrections

14. American Colonist’s engaged in heated debates about weather they should rebell against England. • Around the time of the American revolution women was not aloud to make public speeches. • Phillis Wheatleys book of poetry has been published in london, in 1773. Day 7

15. American Colonist’s engaged in heated debates about weather they should rebell against England. • American colonist’s engaged in heated debates about whether they should rebel against England. • Around the time of the American revolution women was not aloud to make public speeches. • Around the time of the American Revolution, women were not allowed to make public speeches. • Phillis Wheatleys book of poetry has been published in london, in 1773. • Phillis Wheatleys book of poetry was published in London in 1773. Day 7 Corrections

16. Christian missionarys wanted Native Americans to abandon there traditional religious beliefs. And adopt Christian beliefs. • Both Martin Luther King, jr and Malcom X worked tireless for equal rights. • You must of heard some of Dr Kings speeches. Day 8

17. Christian missionarys wanted Native Americans to abandon there traditional religious beliefs. And adopt Christian beliefs. • Christian missionaries wanted Native Americans to abandon their traditional religious beliefs and adopt Christian beliefs. • Both Martin Luther King, jr and Malcom X worked tireless for equal rights. • Both Martin Luther King, Jr. and Malcom X worked tirelessly for equal rights. • You must of heard some of Dr Kings speeches. • You must have heard some of Dr. King’s speeches. Day 8 Corrections

18. “One of his storys she said are called ‘The Devil and Tom Walker’” • What are some of you’re favorite poems wrote by Longfellow. • On Tuesday would you like to go to the main street cultural center with Renata and I, there is a exhibit honoring Mexican American history. Day 9

19. “One of his storys she said are called ‘The Devil and Tom Walker’” • “One of his stories,” she said, “is called ‘The Devil and Tom Walker.’” • What are some of you’re favorite poems wrote by Longfellow. • What are some of your favorite poems written by Longfellow? • On Tuesday would you like to go to the main street cultural center with Renata and I, there is a exhibit honoring Mexican American history. • On Tuesday would you like to go to the main street cultural center with Renata and me? There is an exhibit honoring Mexican American history. Day 9 Corrections

20. I hope this afternoon read all of Self-Reliance. One of my favorite essays. • People say who study Emerson that his ideas our read interesting and inspiring. • The essay states that all Americans needed to monitor the actions of his or her government. Day 10

21. I hope this afternoon read all of Self-Reliance. One of my favorite essays. • This afternoon, I hope to read all of “Self-Reliance,” one of my favorite essays. • People say who study Emerson that his ideas our read interesting and inspiring. • People who study Emerson say that his ideas are really interesting and inspiring. • The essay states that all Americans needed to monitor the actions of his or her government. • The essay states that all Americans need to monitor the actions of their government. Day 10 Corrections

22. Any nature lover whom is required to read “Walden” will ultimately want their own copy. • Walt Whitman does not attempt to conceal the harshness of america in his poetry he shows the pain and meaness of existence. • Experimental Poets like E.E. cummings write clever in order to create figures of speech and other literary affects in their poems. Day 11

23. Any nature lover whom is required to read “Walden” will ultimately want their own copy. • Any nature lover who is required to read Waldenwill ultimately want his or her own copy. • Walt Whitman does not attempt to conceal the harshness of america in his poetry he shows the pain and meaness of existence. • Walt Whitman does not attempt to conceal the harshness of America. In his poetry he shows the pain and meanness of existence. • Experimental Poets like E.E. cummings write clever in order to create figures of speech and other literary affects in their poems. • Experimental poets like E.E. Cummings write clever in order to create figures of speech and other literary affects in their poems. Day 11 Corrections

24. If my mother and me wrote a poem together about our childhood, we can talk about how we were raised different. • In this story Gary Keillor recite the poem O Captain! My Captain at the talent show. • Keillor reads an article about Colorado in National Geographic, then he wants to go their. Day 12

25. If my mother and me wrote a poem together about our childhood, we can talk about how we were raised different. • If my mother and Iwrote a poem together about our childhoods, we could talk about how we were raised differently. • In this story Gary Keillor recite the poem O Captain! My Captain at the talent show. • In this story, Gary Keillor recites the poem “O Captain! My Captain!” at the talent show. • Keillor reads an article about Colorado in National Geographic, then he wants to go their. • Keillor reads an article about Colorado in National Geographic, and then he wants to go there. Day 12 Corrections

26. Poe wrote harsh, negative review of many of the more famous, americanwriters of his time. • The Fall of the House of Usher were published in 1839. • Written by Edgar allanpoethe story takes place in a spooky gothic mansion. Day 13

27. Poe wrote harsh, negative review of many of the more famous, american writers of his time. • Poe wrote harsh, negative reviews of many of the most famous, American writers of his time. • The fall of the House of Usher were published in 1839. • “The Fall of the House of Usher” was published in 1839. • Written by Edgar allanpoe the story takes place in a spooky gothic mansion. • Written by Edgar Allan Poe, the story takes place in a spooky Gothic mansion. Day 13Corrections

28. Dr. heideggers guests’ all have pasts that are less then admireable. • Although dr Heidegger warns his visitors before the experiment takes place. They ignore his advice. • Miss Emily couldnt hardly wait to go for a ride. Day 14

29. Dr. heideggers guests’ all have pasts that are less then admireableDr. Heidegger’s guests all have pasts that are less than admireable. • Although dr Heidegger warns his visitors before the experiment takes place. They ignore his advice. • Although Dr. Heidegger warns his visitors before the experiment takes place, they ignore his advice. • Miss Emily couldnt hardly wait to go for a ride. • Miss Emily could not wait to go for a ride. Day 14 Corrections

30. The old car in the shed, it was a ford maid in 1929. • slave owners usualy tried to prevent there slaves from learning to read and write. • Abolitionists efforts tryed to focus the publics’ attention on the plight of slaves. Day 15

31. Day 15 Corrections The old car in the shed, it was a ford maid in 1929. The old car in the shed, it was a Ford made in 1929. slave owners usualy tried to prevent there slaves from learning to read and write. Slave owners usually tried to prevent their slaves from learning to read and write. Abolitionists efforts tryed to focus the publics’ attention on the plight of slaves. Abolitionists’ efforts tried to focus the public’s attention on the plight of slaves.

32. The civil war is a dark episode in our History the teacher told Henry and I. • The meadow was a peaceful place until the battles ferocity destroyed it. • They should have sat the bucket down carefully than nothing could of happened to it. Day 16

33. The civil war is a dark episode in our History the teacher told Henry and I. • “The Civil War is a dark episode in our history,” the teacher told Henry and me. • The meadow was a peaceful place until the battles ferocity destroyed it. • The meadow had been a peaceful place until the battle’s ferocity destroyed it. • They should have sat the bucket down carefully than nothing could of happened to it. • They should have set the bucket down carefully. Then nothing could have happened to it. Day 16 Corrections

34. “Well there was 15000 people at the dedication ceremony that day said Lee. • Several represtative from the naacp and core will attends the rally. • We would like to be served here Anne Moody said firmly. Day 17

35. “Well there was 15000 people at the dedication ceremony that day said Lee. • “Well, there were 15,000 people at the dedication ceremony that day,” said Lee. • Several represtative from the naacp and core will attends the rally. • Several representatives from the NAACP and CORE will attend the rally. • We would like to be served here Anne Moody said firmly. • “We would like to be served here,” Anne Moody said firmly. Day 17 Corrections

36. The History teacher said, The Indian and the Hundred Cows provides a humerous look at the clash between a Native American culture and christianity. • In the story High Horse’s Courting the young man desperate with love for a girl makes no less than four attempts to win it. • Black Elk’s story is an invaluable piece of sioux fold heritage being recorded in the book Black Elk Speakes by John G Neilhardt saved it for future generations. Day 18

37. The History teacher said, The Indian and the Hundred Cows provides a humerous look at the clash between a Native American culture and christianity. • The history teacher said, “’The Indian and the Hundred Cows’ provides a humorous look at the clash between a Native American culture and Christianity.” • In the story High Horse’s Courting the young man desperate with love for a girl makes no less than four attempts to win it. • In the story “High Horse’s Courting,” the young man, desperate with love for a girl, makes no fewer than four attempts to win her. • Black Elk’s story is an invaluable piece of sioux fold heritage being recorded in the book Black Elk Speakes by John G Neilhardt saved it for future generations. • Black Elk’s story is an invaluable piece of Sioux folk heritage. Being recorded in the book Black Elk Speaks by John G. Neilhardt saved the story for future generations. Day 18 Corrections

38. Mark Twains name was samuel Clemens and he lived his early years in hannibal missouri. • Mark Twains descriptive gifts bringing the experiences of a steam boat pilot to life said the reviewer. • Neither this story or the 3 others in the book is what I remember. Day 19

39. Mark Twains name was samuel Clemens and he lived his early years in hannibalmissouri. • Mark Twain’s given name was Samuel Clemens. He lived his early years in Hannibal, Missouri. • Mark Twains descriptive gifts bringing the experiences of a steam boat pilot to life said the reviewer. • “Mark Twain’s descriptive gifts bring the experiences of a steamboat pilot to life,” said the reviewer. • Neither this story or the 3 others in the book is what I remember. • Neither this story nor the three others in the book are what I remember. Day 19 Corrections

40. Exhausted by the train trek she collapsed as soon as she sees the bed. • Wagners music like so many operas are very moving. • You cant blame him for wanting to seek vengeance whose going to object to that. Day 20

41. Exhausted by the train trek she collapsed as soon as she sees the bed. • Exhausted by the train trek, she collapsed as soon as she saw the bed. • Wagners music like so many operas are very moving. • Wagner’s music, like that of so many operas, is very moving. • You cant blame him for wanting to seek vengeance whose going to object to that. • You can’t blame him for wanting to seek vengeance. Who’s going to object to that? Day 20 Corrections

42. Ben says hed like to live in the last century when the pace of life was more slow. • Woman were supposed to be cared for by there husbands and in return they catered to they’re husbands wishes. • One student asked does the action take place in the time frame of a hour? Day 21

43. Ben says hed like to live in the last century when the pace of life was more slow. • Ben says he’d like to have lived in the last century, when the pace of life was slower than it is now. • Woman were supposed to be cared for by there husbands and in return they catered to they’re husbands wishes. • Women were supposed to be cared for by their husbands, and in return they catered to their husbands’ wishes. • One student asked does the action take place in the time frame of a hour? • One student asked, “Does the action take place in the time frame of an hour?” Day 21 Corrections

44. I Stand Here Ironing is a story about how difficult it can be. Raising children alone. • When I read two poems about a spacfic time period i feel like I get a more better perspective. • Chicago in the early 1900s seems like a miserable place with their poverty hunger prostitution and back breaking labor. Day 22

45. I Stand Here Ironing is a story about how difficult it can be. Raising children alone. • “I Stand Here Ironing” is a story about how difficult it can be to raise children alone. • When I read two poems about a spacfic time period i feel like I get a more better perspective. • When I read two poems about a specific time period, I feel as if I get a better perspective on it. • Chicago in the early 1900s seems like a miserable place with their poverty hunger prostitution and back breaking labor. • Chicago in the early 1900s seems like a miserable place, with its poverty, hunger, prostitution, and back-breaking labor. Day 22 Corrections

46. Edwin Arlington Robinson growed up in Gardiner Maine. • Have you read any’ve Dunbar novels or short stories. • When dexter was twenty four he returned from New York. Day 23

47. Edwin Arlington Robinson growed up in Gardiner Maine. • Edwin Arlington Robinson grew up in Gardiner, Maine. • Have you read any’ve Dunbar novels or short stories. • Have you read any of Dunbar’s novels or short stories? • When dexter was twenty four he returned from New York. • When Dexter was twenty-four, he returned from New York. Day 23 Corrections

48. Immigrants often worked in sweetshops where the conditions were real dangerous. • The Changs are an immagrent family who owns a pancake house from China. • Callie the narrator is also Monas oldest sister. Day 24

49. Immigrants often worked in sweetshops where the conditions were real dangerous. • Immigrants often worked in sweatshops where the conditions were really dangerous. • The Changs are an immagrent family who owns a pancake house from China. • The Changs are an immigrant family from China who own a pancake house. • Callie the narrator is also Monas oldest sister. • Callie, the narrator, is also Mona’s older sister. Day 24 Corrections

50. Has any of you ever heard the saying a joy shared is dubbled, and a burden shared is halfed. • Whom do you think is the better poet of the two. • In the fight against tyranny, one must remember to maintain their dignity. Day 25