“Academia Catavencu” or “The Catavencu Academy”. What is this 'Academia Catavencu'? - background-.
This was all good and interesting stuff but I think it’s way too much information. You need to summarise more. What are the really key points to make?Brief communication history
This seems out of order. Shouldn’t this be in the first section? You just said you were doing the audience bit.
That first point is great. Absolutely the best thing so far - a really good way of illustrating the character of a relationship. That point on its own is more interesting and useful than everything up to here.Consumers & Brand
This was interesting and written with passion. - a really good way of illustrating the character of a relationship. That point on its own is more interesting and useful than everything up to here.
And your strategic ideas seem smart.
And there was a great illustration of the relationship.
This could have been a lot shorter and would have been a lot better. This assignment doesn’t have to have been x pages. It could all have been done in two pages.The end.
... of attracting wrong people for the wrong reasons.